LOL!
Your vocals is weird? are you a girl? cuz it sounds like a girl voice...then if you are a gil, then you the girl wrote this for another girl, weird! The musis wasnt bad, only the bad thing that when the music plays to gether kinda ruined it.
Reviews for "Homophobe (rough Demo)"
Very Nice
Do you listen to a fuckin lot of nirvana? Not a bad thing but thats the first thing i heard when you hit your first note. Its like...nirvana and suicidal tendecies(spelling?) had a love child that turned angry and bitter. I like it alot, though very straight forward with the messege. Idk try to make it louder? otherwise keep it up.
Love,
TheReeferman
Sour-Cherry responds:
Both great bands.....Nirvana and Suicidal Tendencies. ^_^ .
Peace
Sour-Cherry
It's a definite start
Pros: Instrumentals (incredible), Overall vocal style (reminds me of a female Kurt Cobain, if that makes any sense), Song structure (very well layered)
Cons: Lyrics (this is the only part of the song I actually dislike, the lyrics are rather bland with no symbolism or deep meaning; if grunge is your influence then you can look at some lyrics for Skinny Puppy and Nirvana and see how powerful and intense the lyrics are; you don't have to be a great writer to write good lyrics, just takes inspiration), Yelling vocals (the vocals are great up until the parts where you yell; while they're not awful or even bad they could definitely use some work, you kind of talk yell like people do when listening to music and they decide to sing along)
Overall song was really good. I hope to see more from you in the future because you definitely have some talent here.
it's ok
It's ok but nothing really special to me. Your voice is good but sometimes it sounds off a little bit. I really don't know how to describe it.
Sour-Cherry responds:
Ok I'll work with this......
It obvious that your too lazy (even though you make the effort to review) to read the notes I left bellow song. It says (in a nut shell) " This was recorded when I was 16 and had no idea about the techniques of recording" of course it's nothing special to you. You're prolly some tard who Does exact replica's of Bullet for my valantine, who cries when you don't get anywere. And, I have a slight feelling that you're a homophobe. Or you just don't understand. MAN!!! I get sooooo fucking sick of shit like this....
"It's ok but nothing really special to me" WTF??? Then why did you review me?
HAVE FUN ON NEWGROUNDS...........................
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this song has great potential, but i dont think it is at is highest i like it, but it could use a lot of work so i give you half and half
Sour-Cherry responds:
Finally!!
Someone, who isn't nice and/or nasty. I am in totall agreeance with you, as I say above it's a really shit version. but funny enough people seem to like the crap version....One day I tell you and everyone here, It will be done. Homophobe at the moment is sounding a lot different from this recording, so it's a matter of me getting off my ass, getting a recording studio and actually recording it PROPERLY!
Oh and fuck you
There you have it, my Bi-polar response
Peace
-Sour