Harsh...
I wish i knew the full story behind this (although this song is a clear summary). I don't listen to rap, so i can't really comment on your lyrics or flow. However, i can comment (even though i kinda came after the whole "Don't beat your kids" thing) on "... a good solid beating" ...with previous experience. I get the frustration with the "new" generation, but this seems very harsh (even if there is a really good reason behind it).
Lyrics need work...
As I said lyrics need work but you're voice isn't driving us crazy like Yoink. Work on better lyrics and these will be better. The words suck but the music is good.
hahahahaha!
are you serious thats how you rap my 8 year brother can rap better than that you are janky!
lmfao
Huge fail. Both you and Yoink have no flow, no delivery, no punchlines, and pretty decent instrumentals. I say you two just shake hands and play some DDR together. =D