Not very original
What you produced here was not very original. I mean, many of the motives you've done in this movie seem to have already been done in another shape or form from other sprite cartoons. (Especially VGDC whome in my opinion started it all)
I wouldn't discourage you from making other works, but maybe try to spend some more time of some original ideas to pull off with your selected characters.
The music was also annoying after a few loops. I also would advice you to make sure people can't play around with your texts. In your preloader, I found myself playing around with your glitched title text. Make sure its static. Good luck on your next movie...