Not bad for a 1st try...
I'd like to see a finished product. And THANK-YOU for taking the time & the effort to NOT USE STICKS. You rock for that. Okay, some pointers- #1: The green words at the bottom of the screen in the beginning, we can't see them. #2: Credit your music. #3: Develope your plot, unless this was just a 1st try effort to see how well you would do. Anyhoo, keep trying. If you did this well your 1st try, I'm sure the real deal will be even better.