pretty good but...
background needs a lot of work, including the dying and fighting people in the background... they all die/fight in almost the exact same positions. Characters are animated very nicely though, i like your use of shadows and such. The other down point was file size. Im sure you could've compressed it a bit more tho... but good job! im looking forward to the big fight!
nice effort
good work on your presentation. Finaly someone that considers their composition. Great music too. Timing is pretty erratic and it did play smoothly for me. Just fightinf the red guy for the next part would be a mistake. Go all out with some kind of different story.
Good Work
Good stuff. Especially for an Amateur.
Not bad at all
A little blah, but nice animations and a suitable song. It was a most worthy substitute. It could have used a little more action in the background or more colors... elaborate the background in other words... or make the foreground more interesting. One or two moving limbs doesn't compensate for a motionless and poorly rendered background. Over all it was good, aside from the lack of drama relieving me of any sort of emotional response, laughter, vomiting, or tossing my computer out the window in a blind rage. All in all a good flick, work on the interest factor... i.e. make your movies interesting. I did like the battle axe scene, though... choppy choppy (as in *slice*...not choppy work), HA! Blah Blah Blah, have fun making the sequel! Lookin' forward to it.
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I think you put alot of efort into making this movie, but that is not all that it takes. here are a few things that you should know to help you make better movie.
1) motion tweens are ok to an extent but you cant animate youre whole movie using them it makes things look stiff and unatural. You should try keyframing.
2) The people in the backround should have been moving.
3) I like how you drew the people anime style but animation is verry important so work on keyframing
nice work i hope you consider my oppinion.