Needs beefing up
I'm not getting the metal effect. This would go better in General Rock. It's a little too repetitive as well, work on that. Nice work from 1:45 to 3:15.
Reviews for "Pretend"
This is the best guitar I heard on newgrounds
YES!!! FINALLY!!! GOOD GUITAR!!! the bass is very interesting too. the singer reminds me of paul stanley too. GREAT JOB!!!
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Great song, even though the singer seems kind of misplaced there. He has a good voice, but it doesn't go along that well with the music.
The structure of the song is good, there were sure some guys at work that know a lot about songwriting (well, more than I do anyways ^^).
The instruments were played very well and the mixing was done good, too. Too bad the sound quality is a bit low.
Nice!
I really like the vocals, even though they aren't as metal as some other bands.
Pretty sweet
I have a few suggestions. Your vocals are good as they are, but try making them sound more metal. At least like Firewind's or Dragonforce's singer, I know you can make it sound like that, then you'd make sweet metal vocals. The no singing vocals, like the talking are really good, and the guitars and drums sound a little quiet. Work on these and this would be a more AWESOME song!
MattZombie responds:
We are currently rerecording this song will many others, including new songs as well with a new singer. The new singer has the "Metal" voice which we need for songs like this one. We're expecting to have it done sometime in the near future. Thanks for your review.