This was good...
I liked this. It's obviously not front-page material or anything, it's just good quality portal-material. I can't wait for the actual real movie, I predict that to get a better mark - I'm giving you a well-deserved 2 for this one!
As long as you put some witty humour into the main movie, and get some bloody violence for the NG sickos, it will do good! I liked your use of animation, I know how hard it is to do whole frame-by-frame in a movie, so you took the interesting alternative of working different small parts of the bodies, like the eyes. Much more efficient, but also looks nice for the user!
Keep up the good work!