Good, good...and
...you had a solid original idea this time! I'm proud of you my boy! Heh I know you watched Parachute because the part where he looks at the window is alot like the scene in Parachute. ANYWAY that doesn't really matter. You cept the story understandable and funny, as well as fairly good graphics. I'd say all you need to do now would be to improve on your animation, thats it. Good job.
Heh... Thank you!
It's nice to get some good critics...
This review of yours really cheered me up! Thanks
nice
i gave u a four :D
Greeaaaatttt!
I really don't like stick animation, but this is really good you got my 5.
Flashman1000 is an idiot.
This was solid flashin. While the style is used tremendously, because it is the common style for actual cartoons, you did not steal anything from parachute. How stupid is that.
One comment, you could've either
A. Picked better music, as that the one you picked is a bit cliche,
or
B. Made the action fit the music better, so as to eliminate cliche-ness.
Still very good, just some conctructive crit.
it's...
cute... and interesting. and the music sort of match up with this video. newayz, good job! =)