Okay.So where's the rest of it?
I can see where you're going with this, and it looks like it'll be good. I HAD to blam it, because it is a demo, and I don't like them at all, but nothing personal, 'kay? I thought that it has definite POTENTIAL, and I will be watching for your full length, real one. But again, I REALLY dislike the whole "demo" thing. Please don't do that again.
Yours,
Khay