Why didn't it just end!!!
This toon, drags itself along slowly. And it lacks what could of been humor. Nice try, I liked the black and white, and the style. But you could of done much better with them.
Reviews for "Adam's "In the Park""
Bit weird
I liked the way that black and white was used and that could have been really funny but it needed to be longer and have a better storyline.
That was ok...
I really liked the original style, but it was very short and the punchline wasn't very funny. But the drawings reminded me of Microsoft Clip Art.
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because that was hilarious.....
What the
lol that was good! Wierd....... but good! =D