Has potential, needs more time.
Well lets start with the bad to crush your hopes and dreams.
Its preaty cheap animation thats doable in about an hour max. The hard points would be finding the music and voice.
There are volume problems so idd recamend trying to adjust those levels so they are equal. always preview your work.
Now on to the good.
You have very Clean sound. Crappy recordings frequently get me annoyed esp if the rest of the flash is good. I like ninjas as well as stick figures but if you put some more time into them you can get them looking better.