Reviews for I see clouds and stars.

[Buoy]

haha

Thing is it's not a mrac, it's a mac ;)

But yeah the most noticeable thing about this song is definitively the bit-crushed percussion sweetness. One thing about them though, those panning cymbals in certain parts sound like sweet fucking Christ, way too ongoing and aggressive- also stress the hell out of me.

Some very nice melodies embedded into there between all the drummage, FX's and stabs, they're not much present at all.But well that's all-rite. It's DRUM n bass isn't it, not drum n melodies n bass, amirite. Brings me to another thing though, not much bass goin' there.

I'm nitpicking too much. It's another nice, fancy lil song. Good work!

attemptedperfection responds:

oops, my bad. :P
thanks much for the constructive feedback; I may take those cymbals down a notch before the deadline... I tried to put as much bass in as I could, but it's hard to get good bass out of buzz... maybe I'll try a few more things...
anyway, thanks again for the review!

[jnry3]

Needs a little tweak at the EQ

Maybe a little nudge off the overall EQ treble (+2dB at high frequencies... I'm guessing at around 10kHz) will make those high-note keys (I want to call them "star bits") come out. The star bits are hiding (or rather drowned) behind the bass (which is very deep and full-bodied). Just give it a try if you have time.

Hope this helps. ^_^ Nice piece, by the way!

attemptedperfection responds:

Thanks much for the review!
I did a lil eq tweaking, and it seems to have helped out quite a bit with the clarity... see, I have weird speakers/headphones, so frequencies are difficult for me... it takes playing it on a car stereo or something to realize what needs changing. Too bad I couldn't tweak it before the contest deadline... ah well. :/

[snoballandthmonyshot]

good show

the little breakdown at around 50secs is freakin gold. i'm with SR, is a bit relentless some of the drums, not the content more just the tone, the section around 1:30, if you stripped the drums a bit and raised the synth that would be absolute dynamite, the melody has real SP feel to it, can't really hear it tho. re-mix this please then it gets a 10:)
got a new one up myself
peas
;ped

attemptedperfection responds:

aww, but the section around 1:30 has the best drums of all! :(
haha... I'll see what I can do.
Thanks for the review!

[nubbinownz]

hot

Borderline gabber/acid .. very hot stuff my man i LOVE breaks .. period .. i can't get away from them! and yours are hot.

attemptedperfection responds:

thanks!