Different beats
It's not a huge repetition, but one beat does keep doing the same repeated noise over and over. This is some weired ass techno that well isn't so great to hear.
You may have some pattern going on here, so substituing all the beats for some other ones probably would make the song be better.
............ok
....It reminds me of a Game, It's shooting, making that Doink sound lol.
Hmm ..
Well , I did not like it at all , It was just 1 same sound over and over throughout the whole song wich made me feel like I was at a hardware store surrounded by retarded people banging the walls annoying me so much I would like to shoot my brain out .. But then a sound came that could have saved the song if you would have cut out that annoying hammer banging sound .. Try better next time with a real song in it , like a main intrument that acctually uses notes and stuff.. perhaps a Bass would make it more techno and get you a higher rating but it's thumbs down from me mate. =/ try better next time.
its just an example of industrial teKno. and its also work in progress. consider this as an alpha version ;)
Well..
Its abit annoying.
Try harder next time