Reviews for warhammer 40,000 micraab2

[Stinky-Rat]

Not your best work, but.....

...that's already been said. Ok, to your icon artist they used a image from your 13 Black Crusade video. Yeah, pretty much else has already been said by "deadlycontagion". Man, even I have more of a life than him. It's kinda sad. Alright I've been looking at the Medusa V campain website and your name is on the list of commanders who've been co-operating with the xenos, YOU TRAITOROUS SCUM!!!!!!! You're the type who give us Imperial Guard a bad name!!!!!! That would be all.

[Sexyouup]

ok

It was ok. Better then most WH40k submissions. The music didn't fit and the dialoge was horrible. "Fuck the Imperium"? A cultest wouldn't use that dialect beacause they aren't like us. They would say "Death to the False Emperor" or something along those terms.

SeedyKay responds:

Correct. I did this as a kind of sylised 40k, as admitted to in my authors comments. later submissions are far more accurate.

[GreigVarius]

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Just when I thought you couldn't get any worse at drawing, you do.

Totally out of proportion, rubbish drawing, bad spelling, and practically impossible.

They call in SPACE MARINES to kill about four or five cultists with only a laspistol between them?! Like feth they would! A pair of Guardsmen in carapace armour would have been enough!

Also, a Space Marine would never say "Genestealers shall kneel before the Emperor", the man knows his job, he would kill the cultist ASAP and then get back to the Barracks for nourishing gruel, evening prayer and four hours of sleep.

Also, you took so long bringing out this after the first one and it's still this goddamn short?!

SeedyKay responds:

Most foolant of users, note that this film was made during a primitive state of design. We agree that this is shatty, but it is shatty because it was made during a time when shat was the crowning achievement of flash skill. Watch my black crusade film, or play our 2nd 40k shooter, a more up to date helping will allow you to apppreciate the amazing advances made in the field of shoddy web-gaming

[Tammo-Korsai]

Hmmm, a few tweaks needed

I agree with what deadlycontagion says, Xenos worshipppers are better known as Genestealer Cults, created when Genestealers scouting a planet taint human DNA and create hybrids that help cause unrest and disruption, also at that time Lictors infiltrate the planet and sample local DNA from various things.
Then the main fleet comes and swarms the planet and all plants go into wild overgrowth to get more biomass.
Keep going! :)

[deadlycontagion]

Please read some fluff b4 the next one :)

look, it was good and all but there were fluff problems all over the place
1:I know the devil thing was mentioned so im not going over that

2:No one in the 41st millenium talks that way they all sounded like some bad mouthed vietnam vets. not men who have had their religion hammered into them from before they could understand gothic. although normal people may be vulgar at times... words like "fuck" and "hell" would not have survived (around)50000 years (the date "40000 is based of the imperial calender which starts at the time the emperor began his "great crusade" not our calender which starts at the birth of christ) and on most planets have been replaced with local variants or dropped all together

3: spacemarines dont cost any money.. nothing does in the armies of the imperium, if troops are need somewhere, they are there. the armies arent funded by anything they just are... also even if the space wolves where paid it doesnt guarantee that they would show up spacemarines are a society apart from the rest of the empire, even inquisitors cant make a spacemarine chapter give up a few of it brothers if the chapter master doesnt want to because spacemarines are above inquisitors

4:space marines DO NOT talk like that, they wouldnt say something like "oh that was a nice speach, but i dont want to listen to you so now you have to die punk!" they would be more like "DIE BY MY HAND FOUL XENOS WORSHIPPERS!!!"

5:Spacemarines do not want tyranids of any sort to kneel by anyones feet... they would rather they were just dead or never there in the first place

6:in actual fact it would be more likely for the imperium to send in an assassin instead of a couple of scouts

on the plus side you did get some things that most people dont know right

1:your right cults would use las weapons and not have access to anything better (exsept stubguns and autoguns)

2: actually the imperium does manufacture helecopters and they are open for civilian use(un armed of course)... perfect way to sneak in a couple of scouts (if the cult thought it was some civilians come to join there cult they wouldnt shoot them down"

3:space wolf scouts are different than normal scouts, instead of in most space marine chapters where scouts are new recruits, space wolf scouts are veterans who have shown an aptitude for stealth, and are allowed to be a little cocky (if thats what you were going for)

nice job, liked most of it so yah just brush up on some things for the next one (i have no life thats why i know this stuff so dont feel bad if you didnt)

P.S. sorry about the long post i just had a lot to say.

SeedyKay responds:

Heh, a well written review. makes a nice change. I agree with most of your claims, and i think it's fair to say that the film isn't really very 40k in its approach. But i was young and foolish, and still using Paint to make graphics. I probably would be more Imperialistic if i made this now. Consider it more as Tarantino does 40k! except, y'know, not very well. I've tried to balance a fine line between 40k fans and mainstream users, but i always seem to piss off the faithful, and still alienate the rest. So screw it, i'm going full 40k next time! And cheers for backing up the replies to the previous complaints. Not everything in 40k is as rigid as some may think. Plus, choppers with marines... you gotta love it!