its alright
first of all i have to say that the music was wonderfull and that you are certianly origional.
but you really need to clairify and enhance the graphics, and add humor, otherwhise your scores will suffer dramaticly.
you have created a very good trailoer which realy protrays the point of itself
adn you have suported the main idea of your movie with well coordinated graphics and sound/music
you have room for much improvement and i sugest you do.
overall you shouldjust try too add on to this and if you include some humor and improve the graphics a bit, you will have a prize winner.