Not bad .. not bad at all
You made a good flash with a good story. Im sure you will do better in the next episode. Only one thing you should know. Correct your spelling errors :P
Reviews for "A Virus called ZERO 3"
Dark-Vincent responds:
Ok i'll try! Thanks!
Not Much Of A Fan Of Sprites ...
... but you asked for a review, so here's a fair one. Though the sprites are already drawn for you, you still have to rip them from somewhere, put them in the proper sequence and get rid of any and all bounding boxes that encompass them. That takes some work so I admire your dedication and talent for being able to make a story with the characters as they're presented. Overall, the cartoon looks very good.
My only negative crit is your spelling and grammar. I understand that English is not your first language (Brazilian?) and your usage is far better than some Americans I know, but, if your cartoon is going to rely on text to tell the story, then the spelling and grammar should be perfect. Find someone who speaks and writes English well to help you correct your script. If you can't find anyone, you can always e-mail me (my address is in my profile). Also, you should leave the text boxes up a little longer so the average person can read them.
All in all, your cartoons are interesting. Fix the spelling and grammatical flaws and your work will really shine! Best of luck!
Dark-Vincent responds:
thanks dude, if i have troubles in the grammar i'll tell u, thanks a lot!
Pretty Good.
It was good except your spelling errors, they made some of ur story line difficult to read. But nice job, i look forward for ur next episode.
Dark-Vincent responds:
Thanks for the review, and... hey! A clock!!! Cool!!
Mega Man & X are TWO different robots...
It seems that having X remember people like Bass and Auto was a big part of your movie here, but there's one problem with that. X was -created- AFTER Mega Man, and they are two different beings... X does not have Mega Man's memories, nor would he remember anything Mega knew, or anyone Mega met...
Dark-Vincent responds:
I know that megaman and X r diferent robots, there's a reason for the flashback.... thanks for the review!!
too boring
that was soo boring but the series is still wery good...lol rotoblades