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Reviews for "A Virus called ZERO 3"

Not Much Of A Fan Of Sprites ...

... but you asked for a review, so here's a fair one. Though the sprites are already drawn for you, you still have to rip them from somewhere, put them in the proper sequence and get rid of any and all bounding boxes that encompass them. That takes some work so I admire your dedication and talent for being able to make a story with the characters as they're presented. Overall, the cartoon looks very good.
My only negative crit is your spelling and grammar. I understand that English is not your first language (Brazilian?) and your usage is far better than some Americans I know, but, if your cartoon is going to rely on text to tell the story, then the spelling and grammar should be perfect. Find someone who speaks and writes English well to help you correct your script. If you can't find anyone, you can always e-mail me (my address is in my profile). Also, you should leave the text boxes up a little longer so the average person can read them.
All in all, your cartoons are interesting. Fix the spelling and grammatical flaws and your work will really shine! Best of luck!

Dark-Vincent responds:

thanks dude, if i have troubles in the grammar i'll tell u, thanks a lot!

da hora

percebi q vc é brasileiro então vou escrever em portugues:
combine os filmes com os endings e no proximo filme coloque os personagens de megax6 .
seilá finja que o zero morreu e faça com que ele pegue a espada.
já que no x6 o mega tem espada.

Dark-Vincent responds:

ahh acho q isso num seria mt bom, jah q eu jah começei a serie com sprites de mmx3, acho q tem q terminar assim, talvez no final da serie eu faça isso
valeu pelo review cara!

it was pretty decent

the overall movie was great and all, but the ONE thing that ruined was ur poor grammar. dude, go thru school or something. there was like 10 mistakes in this movie alone. and u leave ur speech bubbles on for like an hour, and theres one speech bubble that is only there forl ike 1/2 a second. but it was good none-the-less.

Dark-Vincent responds:

yeah yeah....

hmm

good

Dark-Vincent responds:

Thanks!

not a big fan of mega man

it was descent but not my kind of movie

Dark-Vincent responds:

well... ok!