Reviews for Beggar Man

[gfoxcook]

It's a good night for minimalism, apparently

It's not like this flash contains a ton of drawn scenes or characters. Nope, it just contains four shots: the street with the flickering lamp, the view from the window outwards, the view from the window looking inwards, and the view from outside of the window.

And it contains the storyteller in two eras and a brief image of a painful memory from the past (personally, never seeing his wife might have been better, but... that's okay).

But it's also not like this flash needs more than that. The song choice helps more than most flashes I've seen lately, and the text itself is fairly good for a short movie. Only one gripe: I hate "i" used instead of I. Capitalise, damnit. #;-}>

Nice bit of pseudo-film noir here, good job.

[Enoll]

you remind me of me

i love this movie.
it touched my right here. and here...
i think you need a public profile.
make more.....

[Sanchin]

Not that bad

Your flash isn't that bad but one thing bugs me. The story, you made it up, right? Cause the chances of it really happening are about zero. I'm sorry if you're telling the truth, it just seemed far fetched. Aside from that it's a good first entry.

abacus responds:

yes, his name was Daniel.. he was 71 when he passed away. I indulged somewhat on his torment, that's how i saw it when he first spoke to me.

[HKImpact]

gj

I liked the story alot. It is really meaningful. Just one question. Who is the 2 of them? When he was shooting his trigger happy little self he shot 2 shots. 1 into the wife, and 2nd one into ? his kid most likely im guessing. Otherwise great story. Next film you make you should come up with some better animation. I can see it in you, your drawings were great. Goodluck on all ur films.

-Impact

[XwaynecoltX]

((( TOUCHING )))

Hey that was nice, i like how it was all around this one street and this one guy, could have used more animating, but it was nice, the music was cool, it just gave it that perfect feel to the film, and nice rain effect with the drops and all, nice job indeed...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Touching, with good effects...

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