Reviews for DBZ goku vs vegeta part1

[PerfectFrito]

Needs a little work

All in all, it's not a bad idea. I just don't think it was done as well as it could have been. The dialogue was a little too dry, like watching a series that had bad subtitles. I think someone else already mentioned the grammar errors, so I won't go into any detail there. Another problem was the text went by a little fast. I think if you put a little more work into the story, it could turn out to be one of the best DBZ sprite animations at NG. I just think it needs something a little more interesting than Vegeta deciding to turn good and then going back to being evil for no apparent reason. Keep all this in mind, and the next version will be a lot better.

[mr-jamaica]

YOU ROCK, AND SO DOES DBZ

im giving you a five also, cos its a great submission and its based on the best anime' ever, dbz.

[Neo-Bahamut]

That junk rocked!

I am voting 5 for this.I have to know from what video game did you get the characters from?

dbzgokutheman responds:

Thanks for the great vote man. I think the Goku came from HYper Diemension and Vegeta Came from Super Butoden 1 along with Frieza. Its really al thanks to dbgtn.com and the webmaster FRANK who said i could use it.

[Ress-Cor]

Hmmm

The only reason I gave a score at all is because I liked your idea of changing the DBZ story line, it was kinda neat. But the rest of it is really wortheless. BUT! Don't give up! Keep trying man, practice makes perfect.

Later.

[mx]

great best dragon ball z on ng

good job finsh and i will give 10