There are several interesting ideas here, but it is still true that it could be better. Anyway, good song! :D
There are several interesting ideas here, but it is still true that it could be better. Anyway, good song! :D
I'll get the issues out of the way first because there aren't many and they aren't terrible --
The waveform never goes above a certian volume and rarely under a certain volume. It looks almost as though the entire song is limited. The is what causes the drops to lack power -- they are the same volume as the intro and buildup. Also, the piano that comes in after the drop around 1:04 is SO compressed and loud. It sounds like you cranked it +6db or raised the volume via a compressor, it loses all of its dynamics and takes up a ton of space in the mix, leaving room for nothing else.
Aside from these issues, I find the song's melodies to be pretty nice and fun to listen to. The drop's sound design is good and the mixing is pretty solid. Well done!
the piano was full keyzone classic, i now use labs (chords) and keyzone classic (melody), which actually makes a difference.
i did forget to add ott and saturator, so maybe that's why
~vort
I know how it feels to fix the song clipping. About the song, I liked the drop, although I expected it to be something melodic or relaxing due to the name you gave it, but it was still good :)
"melodic" isnt one of the tags so maybe not melodic dub xd
Hey vortonox! do u have the stems of this track? i like the melodies and i want to remix it :D (about de mixing and mastering, I recommend use pro Q-3 and Ozone 8)
i dont have it, i'll remake it instead for u