Not bad, but keep working.
I reviewed your first movie, awhile back. What did I say about working on your drawing skills? I liked the way you showed us some of the necromancer's back story though. "Necromancer: this is your life!" Couple things. Firstly, you need to pronounce "necromancer" right. It's driving me crazy. It's "Neck-row-mancer" not "Nee-crow-mancer" Also, I don't think you should have had satan in this move. Some sort of other demon would have done, like Malbulgia or something. Satan didn't fit too well. Besides that, good work, work on your drawing style, and I can't wait to see the next one!