err....
Clap clap?
Make it longer next time
err....
Clap clap?
Make it longer next time
betetr sound but it was short
i didnt get it i forgot what it was now.....
What? That's it?
^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the close up drawing. I thought it was cool how you showed many different angles of the same guy at the same time.
^^Needs Improving^^
Again, this movie doesn't have a very good storyline at all. There is some guy with a guitar that plays, and then one character is in a store and asks what an NPC is. That's not a very good storyline at all. I thought perhaps this would have something more to do with the guy with the guitar. Another thing, less important, is that the music WAS a little annoying as the last reviewer said.
Agreed.
WTF?
Okay. That made NO sense at all. ( Needs a storyline ) The characters didn't walk, and that son was really annoying. Sorry, its just a really crappy submission.
Explain why you gave it a zero.
Good job
I really liked it. But this chapter is much more shorter than other chapters and was less funny. but still i enjoyed it very much. not as impressive as the other ones but really well done. by the way what is your web?
My web? Website? Go here: http://www.syboard.net/fj