A nice good rating.
Well, that was an interesting story... I hope you come out with another. The graphics werent that great. I can tell u drew them yourself. The sound was good. Ineractivity was good. Style was ok. The violence was great and so was the humor. Overall I gave this an 8 outta 10. Nice...
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learn to spell
I can help you.
Spell sitting, consider, what's, he's, maybe, robbing, wear, give me, your, already, couple, staring, alley, here, talent, they're, that's, huh, there's more, I just didn't feel like finding all.
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IT was o.k but thier was a lot of errors in this and you defently need to clean up you graphics.
I just fixed some of the errors, tell me is there are any more, and could you be more specific.
Good debut
It was okay... It would have been a lot better with animation instead of clicking, and listening instead of reading...
I'll keep that in mind when Im working on episode 2.