Needs work. Looootttttssss of work.
It's actually a pretty funny concept but you didn't implement it very well. The little intro is sloppy as hell and it just felt like you did "whatever", just pasting on scene after scene without realy thinking it through. I think you should really work on it and carefully plan out each scene, then jack up the framerate. Maybe then you'll have something. Because to be honest, nothing here was particularly funny and the emulated visuals were poorly implemented.