i luv sad songs
lost love,
painful past,
trying to force it all away,
trying to remember the good times
trying to forget how many friends i've lost
trying to be happy
building the courage to talk to someone that understands ME,
failing miserably
^my entire life^
this is what i think when i listen to your music
and for this:
i thank you
it makes me rember.
it makes me rember times in the distant past that i had long forgot,it makes me happy to rember.....the best times of my life long gone.
well that was different
eyes open, yes it stirred a bit of emotion, then i closed them and got dizzy tryin to imagine a look for the song. maybe it's just my life idk lol, i really do like this one
Very good.
I can tell you wanted to give this song emotion and whatnot, but the ending wasn't very good, perhaps because the piano's volume was too low or enough emphasis wasn't given on some notes, I don't really know. Composition-wise, it's excellent though. However, 2:41 sounds offkey to me.
Sounding good so far :)
My favourite parts of this piece is probably the middle theme and the ending part starting from around 1:30+, especially when it speeds up. I can vaguely envisage a strong bass line running through from this part actually (maybe a cello or something like that... perhaps even replacing the lower piano part to lengthen each note) but just a personal random thought that you can quite freely ignore :)