What the hell... I miss you, i know. ???
Ok, this should not be on ng!!!!
Reviews for "The Mourner"
No story. What's going on?
For it to be sad, you need to know the charachter first before he or she dies, or you just end up not caring. Plus, the guy's head looks kinda squashed. Remember stories are GOOD for flash movies! Try them.
what?
the artwork is decent at best and as for the story....well there really isnt one, a guys at a tombstone, says i miss you, spirit says i know, over that doesnt make a story, im not even sure what that makes the music is nice but the quality isnt the greatest, this just didnt make much sense to me and i didnt enjoy it at all
ha ha
Your Mom dies in a car crash you goto here grave sand say "I miss you"... okay then she says "I know"... nice... job of wastin my time!
soo
so its a still picture, things fade in and out, a couple of leaves fall.......take a bit more time man and think of oh i dont know,,,a story instead of some guy sitting in front of a tombstone. if you want people to like your cartoons. make them like-able.