Reviews for Sly Cooper

[Coop]

Decent sketch

Not a bad effort, but this does need some refining. Personally, I'd suggest that you work within the parameters of adding colour to your pieces. This way, you can draw attention away from the iffy parts of the detail, where some parts are too angular. Sometimes, the colours can smooth these sharp edges out and you'll produce a much better image all told.

With the weapon held by the character here, do you perhaps think it could be held at a 90 degree angle to the current stance? As with any large weapon as you're jumping through a window, you would need to make it as easy as possible to get through and not get caught, causing the jumper to fall to their death.

More practice with sketching will give you a better command of the pencil, but you need to do something about the rough lines that are very evident in the foreground. Finally, when you are shading, please try to keep each area shaded in the same direction - don't shade some of it horizontally and then switch to vertical, as it does look messy.

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[XwaynecoltX]

Decent but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad of a drawing you have here, now there can be some improvments on a few areas, but first off i like the shades and effort that was put into this, and also noticed you put in angle, and what i think it busting out of the window, so there alone you have given your art piece some :ACTION-SCENE: which is really always neat to see in still art, now i do think you could present that better, like when he is busting out the window, now i did notice you did have some wind streaks which is neat but you have to give it the effect that he is really flying out so fast so a few more noticble streaks would sufice, also as for the breaking out part, now if its glass have glass chucks and pieces just flying everywhere might help and give more for the effect of the action scene, Now as for your character drawing it was notbad but could use some refining more improved line-work and character designs tend to take more effort and time, the shades look really good, and i am thinking if you put this through like photoshop and or paintshop pro bringing in some color and even effects like lighting and deeper colors, but anyways you can run some colors through this so it has a more satnding out look and with color it looks much better, well hope you found something from this review, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas like shattered glas, more wind strokes, some color, and effects, and more refining of the drawing itself,

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