That Gerudo-Theme is one of my favorite zelda-themes - what could be seen as a bonus for you. ;) In fact there is nothing bad about your remix and you reached one goal that only a small part of VG-music-remixes reaches: There is enough diversion in it to entertain the listener. E.g. the augmentation during the remix is well done. :-) It's 9/10 cause there cpuld have been a bit more action at the end - just one step further and it would be perfect. :-)
Nice Job after all!
Greetings from Germany.
(Language-mistakes? Me? Huh? ;-) )