I don't like rap, mecha and computer voices.
I am not going to say bad things because I hate some of the things that make this flash watchable, I will say bad things because you made a slide-show instead of a movie, had little humor and didn't have the guts to rap it yourself.
This is boring.
I would have given you a four but I honestly don't think you did well this time and I am trying to show that in the most vivid way.