Better off dead.
Well, you seem to be very good at coloring...but not much beyond that. The art was lacking on the technical side, and the animation was so weak I wanted to punish my monitor for relaying it to me. Seriously guy, you need to just find someone with talent and ride their coat-tails. Otherwise, you might end up like all the other shitty artists on this site...broke and living with your mommy.
My roommate says that your choice in music is horrifying, if you wanted hardcore...you would have been better off with Julie Andrews.