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Yo sorry bout the other one it was messed up but i promise this is the real one. Same comments as before and please dont critisize too much.

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Entertaining

This was an entertaining flash you have here, the animation was notbad, but the "ART" and drawings needs to be refined and payed more attention of, more smoother lines and better frame rate in this whole piece actually. also adding a stop action code will stop the "LOOPING" just some things that can hekp you improve on this animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
drawings needs to be refined and payed more attention of, more smoother lines and better frame rate in this whole piece actually, and one last thing ad a stop action code.

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Didn't like it.

You should try something besides action movies.The artwork was terrible next time try drawing more carefully.I dont like dragonballz, it was a bad choice in flash.Not a fan of the music but it wasnt too terrible. Next time just pay more attention to detail and dont make the movie in ten minutes.I'm being as nice as I can in this review and I'm not trying to be insulting as I sound but it was a poorly made flash.

Hes a lot better than goku!

Hes a lot better then goku, goku never kills his nmys, stupid wussy!

great!

Your pretty good at drawing!(at least DBZ)

Kinda cool...

Yeah...I didn't like the...um...drawings...and stuff....But it got better as it went along.

And it's not 'Saiyen' either...if you're going to criticise someones spelling, atleast get it right yourself...

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Votes
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Score
3.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 23, 2003
10:22 PM EDT