Incomplete will score you NOTHING >_<
By the looks of things you have the ability to do some good stuff, but you just need to put a LOT more effort into your work. Don't ever submit a half finished piece of work, it will only attract insults.
Like the previous reviewer said, clean up your graphics, those sketches are like the preperation stage of a flash and nothing like what a final version should be like.
Also a loading bar would be helpfull so people with 56K (this is not me btw) don't have an animation freezing half way, also remember to stop the music when the replay button is hit as doubleing up music is very annoying >.>
Thats all for this rant. You can do better.