Honestly, it looks like you put more effort into writing the description & tags than the animation.
Edit:
Hey, I know it sounds mean, but I call 'em like I see 'em. Some of the imagery looks like traces from scenes in the shows, Pomni attempting to swear wasn't even changed from the pilot's scene & the animation is all over the place with the movement fluidity & lack thereof.
All I'm saying is put some more time & thought into it. Sky's the limit.