The art is average but the story compensates for it!
This is a story based on my insecurities
how I often feel as if I am hurting my friends and family without knowing it or always ending up alone
The art is average but the story compensates for it!
While you do have a really neat idea for a story, the quality is not doing it justice. I would recommend a better animation program like Flash 8 for example because it looks like you used MS Paint or something similar. And even then more animation in general could've been used rather than still images. Again you do have a good concept, it could've been fleshed out way more. Good luck!