The idea of a cartoon that tells the exaggerated fan-made inside life of rappers could be really good. This cartoon leaves more to be desired. The multimedia style you're going for would have worked if you were able to read the facial expressions clearer. Take shit like negative space and values into account next time so I don't gotta lean towards my computer screen and squint to know what face Ken Carson is making. It also doesn't help when the entire cartoon is DARK too. Moving on from the "art", the writing didn't help carry either because I didn't find this funny and I'm sure this was supposed to be a comedy. If I had to guess, this type of common writing is the result of only obtaining your resources for inspiration only limited to cartoons/anime instead of real world experiences and observations which mostly stunts your creativity to write anything unique because your subconscious will tell you "that's not what the cartoons I grew up do!" Might explain the adult swim inspired layout you got going... Can't say I'm a fan of this cartoon overall but some ideas here can glimmer with enough polish and thought behind it.