you have a lot of talent and potential, my friend! I could see this with its witty sense of humour and gore becoming quite big on NG!
if I had to bring up some critiques though, if I may? the subtitles could use some moving around every now and then, maybe into the more emptier spaces of the background? because sometimes the captions tend to blend in with the thick lines used to make up the characters :>
some more audio may be a good idea too, if the silence isn't a stylistic choice!
please don't think I'm trying to rag on you though, I think your sense of humour is very fun and I like seeing how fluid the characters' movements are! :D