Not exactly the best music video ever. >_>
Score:
Well, this time I gave your flash a 5/10 and a 2/5. It just wasn't that well done. The graphics were good except for the characters which were subpar at best. The song was too "emo" for me and I couldn't stand listening to it. Violence, Humour, and Interactivity not actually present and thus not taken into account.
Title:
Agents of man was a good choice of a title. I am in full agreement of naming a flash that revolves around one song the name of the song. I think it gives the flash more depth and makes it much better. Yet, when you toss "REVISED" in caps into the title then it takes away from the flash. Yes, you may have revised it, but that doesn't mean you need to change and kill the title. It would be much better as "Agents of man" alone.
Preloader:
It was rather dull and plain. Just a nice font and nothing more. Preloaders should be loaded with eyecandy for those 56k users (I know, I used to have 56k once, and when you have to wait that long on a flash then you won't be waiting if the preloader is bland).
Content:
Too much of the flash was just the words to the song. That's not something that should fill up the flash. Your flash should be all video and not text. A better technique is to have the words on the bottom, like subtitles, as the flash video plays through. Instead of having the text intrude on the flash.
Overall:
The flash was mediocre at best, but it still has the potential to be made into something really good. I hope you make a newer version of it later to show your improvement, I'm sure you have by now. Keep up the good work and never stop trying.
