everything is just fr fire

flowing animation and great soundtrack. Shits 10/10

Really cool! Getting some Martin Mystery vibes (O u O)

Bless you.

I honestly love the ideas. Great little mock trailer for a series. However, the trailer has a few flaws.

I wanna start with the last thing I noticed, which was the title text. Hockey, love, and GUTS!!! The word "hockey" looks a little boring, the letter Y as a hockey stick with a part attached is nice, but the other letters look basic. "Love" being in cursive is a nice way to write the word, but maybe the text should be black instead of white to make it look different. And GUTS, its just thick black writing, it could be so much more. Maybe organs spelling the word guts, or muscles, or a limb, or a tattoo on a limb! Something that takes guts, something tough or gross. The way each word is separate with small torn-looking paper around each word makes them look like different titles, they could have differences but in the end look like they are all one big logo. It needs some togetherness, I think logo design is very important especially later down the line when you use it for merchandise, you definitely want it to look good and be iconic.

The animation is nice, some parts do need a little bounce or reaction, like when a character turns and their hair doesn't move. Or when they do a quick action it looks a little choppy. The timing is well done, it fits to the music. A little tlc will go a long way.

The character designs look good, I like that we see them in and out of uniform with different emotions and differing personalities, with that said the two main girls look strikingly similar.

The concept is interesting. I imagine the two girls's rivalry will often get in the way of almost eveything and seeing them work together to overcome those obstacles will be a fun time. If their similar design was intentional as they have to match as shown in this trailer, then maybe one detail you can change is their noses. Since they aren't twins they don't have to look like they are! I hope this improves, I enjoyed it.