This is Episode 20! It's a bit of an exposition dump episode. I hope everyone doesn't find it all too obvious and cliche, but I really liked the big bad, and I think it makes for a great final boss.
Teejay meets the Unown and they reveal the truth behind the Chaos Clouds!
As always, I really like getting feedback in the comments, so tell me your favorite/least favorite parts!
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And the plot thickens. I like the thought you put into the Missingno twist: the beach at night, going mad and losing memories. I also like the take of having the Unown being the keepers of secrets in this way, rather than just being used as an alphabet. While the battles remain the slowest part of the episodes, I like where you're going with the story, and I'm curious to see how it plays out.
MissingNo as a Chaos Pokemon here is very fitting!
Glad Cynthia came around. Now to face Team Galactic and get the Codeox!
Liked the twist, actually. While it's true that Missingno is treated more as a joke meme, the way you used it here feels fitting to the entire "chaos" theme going on:
Missingno is a glitch, it corrupts the game its in when it shows up. So what would that look like in-universe? Like the end of the world and everything going up in flames.
So yeah, I'd say you nailed it. I also like the idea of Unown being linked to odd happenings in the world. While I feel that their exposition was a tad too direct, I think they managed to come across as mystical...which I believe was the point, right?
The one thing I feel was a bit off was Cynthia. Not in the idea of her not wanting to try hoping for a solution...but more that I feel like it would have fit a bit better for her to come across as...I guess more angry or cold than outwardly scared? And let me be clear: I don't mean that her being afraid is the issue (I actually think it fits, considering the scope at play here) but more that her SOUNDING overly scared feels a tad off since...well, she's Cynthia XD
...either that or have Teejay admit to feeling a bit more scared than he sounded. Either could help XD
Still, I liked the general direction this went. Looking forward to what comes next!
P.S: What happened with Melanie though??? I know that Teejay BARELY won their pokemon battle, but we didn't really get to see her reaction or Teejay's final word on the matter or anything...kinda left me a bit confused, I won't lie.
What a twist!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next episode!!!!!!