Not a bad animation, but the timings of the transitions and screen recordings are just too long and awkward.
I recently completed this short film, although I didn't have much time to work on it - it took me about two weeks. It's in Portuguese, but I believe the message is clear, or at least I hope so. I used only Blender, Audacity, and Krita to create it. As you can see, this short turned out a bit rushed, lacking some refinement in the lines, etc. I didn't create many sketches; I sort of improvised as I went along. I was curious to know if I could work this way. I hope you like it and can evaluate my work, even if it's just for criticism."
Not a bad animation, but the timings of the transitions and screen recordings are just too long and awkward.
I understand... But at least did her intention become clear?