So despite watching the whole video, I have no idea what the story is. There were some spelling mistakes that took away from whatever story you were trying to tell, and I *heavily* suggest using a specific font for your text instead of hand-writing. The way you write the letter n is too similar to the letter h, which can make it hard to read. That and organic hand writing is harder to read unless you're the one who wrote it. There was also an audio issue where the music overpowered the text sound effects, and it was so loud that I had to reduce the volume.