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The Return Part 3

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Act 1 is finally at a close

what do you think she will find out there?

Guess we'll find out in Act 2


Credit & Disclaimer:

Sound effects and material textures were public domain at the time of download for this work.

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Very nice

This one has some good quality even some of the smaller animation points like the female character shaking her hair very well done, I do feel like this was lacking more sounds maybe some dialog etc, you have some nice ideas and showcase them well some pretty good quality anyways good entertainment here.

~X~

Neat mixture of animation styles

Animation is good, and I liked the character design. You could probably add a few more frames here and there to improve the flow, but I actually think at this point, animation wise, you might need to learn where less is more. I'm not one of them fancy artist types, so I can't give you any specifics, but it felt like each scene ran just a bit too long and too slow.

Maybe if you look at some old classic cartoons (e.g. bugs bunny, etc) you might get some idea how to put more action in less time/frames?

Anyway, just a feeling. Other than that, the sound design was good, but not amazing. That'll probably improve with practice though (maybe, lol, I dunno, it seems like a pain in the ass when I think about it, so you're already doing great in my book).

In sum, great work! Keep it up :D

Woarel responds:

thank .w.

oooh, okie, will look into it .w.

wtf

This is so good. I think at times the 2d animation and 3d animation don't mix perfectly, but they mostly do. It's quite slow pace, but I like that! Sometimes it's nice to just sit back and enjoy the interesting, and incredibly executed mix of 3d and 3d.

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Feb 15, 2023
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