LAME!
i don't really like how you over used the language!
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finally... this took longer then what it looks and i did put work into it... wasnt just a little crappy overnighter
Not that good.
Also rated wrong
ok....
well its ok but it looks like an one nighter.
good but
needs music
it was ok...i mean,,
a storyline wouldda been better, why did those people hold him fer ransom for no apparnet reason whatsoever?and he was stoned to shit, how did he know karate?