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The Mario Betrayal ep.2

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This is the next episode in my serise

ep.2 is much more better looking than my first and has more depth. It even has a cameo apperence!

if you miss some word's because of my stupid text e-mail me and I'll tell you

I'll let you go and watch my moive

late

P.S.I'm going to need lot's of help on ep.3, so if you have flash experience and want to get exposure e-mail me and we'll talk
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I know ths moive sumed but I slowed down the text and made it a little better so how is it

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god but...

positives: good scheming good plot liked the army and mega man, very good anatmation and audio.

bad stuff: very short almost no action, mostly they where just talking.

final opinion: i give an 8 because of the anitmation and story line, good audio to but u need it make it longer and more stuff to it like more sounds, maybe voices. good movie tho

hay

i cant press START next time try to press start bfore you send it

i like it

itts a good movie when i make my movies it alwas turns out like going wight that sucks lol i liked the big army that was a little funny lol

Highwind responds:

Thanks dude

Here's some reasons

Graphics - 3
I gave you a three because I am myself a flash animator and I know usually how annoying the sprites can be.
Sound - 1
Don't use repetetive music over and over instead of one steam. Take some time to find some good music and steam throughout a whole part before you do the scene.
Interactivity - 0
Speaks for itself. Didn't interact anyway, so not anyway I can grade it.
Style - 1
I gave you this because you COULD OF made buttons that scroll pages during the text and you didn't. The text was very hard to read and didn't last long enough.
Violence - 0
Uhh... They didn't fight.. Nuff Said..
Humor - 0
(-.-) Nuff said.
Overall - 4
I gave you a overall of 4 because I thought that's what this movie deserves. Even though other people think it needs a 1 they probably never made any flash and never will. Some DO some don't. Im not saying that all people that blam movies aren't flash animators.

Highwind responds:

I like these reviews, they accually make sense and they help me out, thaxs

man...

That just sucked... Cant belive this didnt get blammed... no sounds, no nothing... I couldnt read half the text either... i'm sorry man, but try and watch your movie over and over again before you post it to newgrounds...

Highwind responds:

well I guess since you're a expericed moive maker then I can't really be offended

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4,482
Votes
10
Score
1.70 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 2, 2003
6:08 PM EST