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Well i thought that the ending was good with the search for zelda being called off because of her death and your humor was pretty good but you really needed to place your dialog better, i mean it was really hard to read white writing on a colorful background, i reckon maybe a speech bubble or perhaps a space underneath the flash would have been a great location. Some original zelda sound effects would have gone nicely with this flash as well. Overall a pretty decent effort.

~H-J~

K

^^Good Points^^
The whole K-mart sword thing was kind of humorous. I think this could have been decent had I been able to follow it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you have a shitload of white space around the actual movie, so you could have used that by either making the scenes bigger or the screen smaller. All that white space just makes you look silly. Also, the background kept moving and copying itself and then disappearing later. Aside from all that, the worst thing was that you didn't leave enough time for the text. I could only read half of what was going on, and therefore had a hard time staying interested in this.

Sorry but...this is really bad

I guess someone just wanted to make it on the site...well, there ya go...

go away now...

Lame

This is the lamest peice of shit i have ever seen on newgrounds. Pls learn some good flash techniques before making an another dreadful movie

dont care..

i dont care if it was yer first flash movie it was lame and dumb and had a weak story and stuff
lousy graphics
the pictures keep moving and the tet was way to fast
and damn how old are you jesus christ man zelda getting fucked by ganon a-hum WEAK!!!!

LOZER