Cool stuff

So this was like an animated comic but the way you presented each new frame was very good You hit all the great moments with this film And This has a great idea behind it maybe even a cutting edge feel about it This is a decent concept, I love the talented art style the story depth of the comic and ofcourse the awsome animation you should keep up with this style and you have cleverly used some nice effects and elements to make this a good submission, Great comic style animation here

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good animation

That kid should wear a helmet.

Determination

Really nice style and rhythm with all of this; your presentation is super slick. Definitely looking forward to whatever you end up making next!