I know this may be minor to some but the aspect ratio is really due to the fact that it was originally meant to be for YT shorts but I ended up exceeding the time limit by 22seconds,usually I'd make my animations in a 16:9 aspect ratio, I may post it on Tiktok but at the time of writing this Im not sure. Anyway though my expectations aren't that high, I am hoping you enjoy at least a bit of it, but hey if its bad its bad no questions asked ,and if it truly sucks you can tell me what makes it suck so I can improve on my work next time. It's also the first time I even composed my own music(which is why it may not be that good but hey everyone starts somewhere), but regardless of quality and regardless of what people think about it, I'm pretty happy with what I came up with.
Thats all I want to say. I'd like to thank you for watching it weather you liked it or not.
The one thing I noticed is at the first scene when the characters are walking, the booths behind them were moving the wrong way. Instead of the booths moving alongside them, they should be moving away from the characters. Be careful with that. With that said, this was decently well animated and I feel like you're not giving yourself enough credit. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the feedback, as for the error yeah thanks for pointing it out, I have no idea how I did not see that error especially it being more obvious than ever, luckily it is a decently easy error to fix and I am going to fix it before I upload it into other platforms, can't here since I already posted it so there really isn't any turning back. Other than that glad you liked it in some ways. Thanks for watching.
Very well animated! The sound design is great too. The only minor nitpik is in the beginning when you see the group walking. The direction the carnival stalls are going compared to them make it looks like they're walking backwards. Dunno if that was intentional or not. Overall pretty good!
It wasn't intentional, it was an error I ended up overlooking/non seeing despite how obvious it is in hindsight. I am going to fix it since NG isn't the only website Im planning to upload on, again I may upload it on other sites. Its just I cant fix it here since I already uploaded it and there really is no turning back, but yeah that's about it when it comes to the error. Thanks for watching btw I really appreciate it.