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Story Arc Chapter 1: First Job

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When they ran out of food, JC had to get a job at Jeremy's workplace. Meanwhile, Red and Kate were grocery shopping.


Story Arc is a fictional series about JC's dream of becoming a famous internet animator while the universe has other plans for him.


YouTube link: https://youtu.be/4wEqJsdYdwg

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It Was Ehhhh Mediocre The Backgrounds Are Empty And Lack Details Beyond A Few Trees The Effects Are Boreing And Uninteresting Voices Are Okay The Animateion Lacks Personality Like Visual Effects Theres Also Not Any Risky Jokes As A Result The Humor And Enjoyability Deminishes The Story Is Uninteresting There Were Plot Inconsistencys Like How Did One Character Get A Gun We Never Saw Him Pick It Up Why Did He Not Use It In The Store The Story Goes Over The Top But Does Not Take Advantage Of It Like We Have A Guy Who Tries To Rob The Store Then Out Of Nowhere He Grows Giant Why Not Have Him Do Something Silly Like Do A Number Two But Not Show The Gross Material Or Have Him Pass Wind Or The Job Why Not Have Some Interesting Character Developement Like Personal Things About The Character We Just Get He Wants To Be A Illistrateor Though Its Not Much Graphics And Effects Are Low Quality Add Funny Effects That Not Only Impress You But Friends Sorry If You Have No Friends You Know Paceing Is Key The Story Moves At A Slow Pace By Repeating A Gag Until Its Funny Thats Not Comedy Best Advice Increase Visual Aesthetics Build Character Developement To Enjoyable Characters Add Some Risky And Experimental Humor In The Mix And It Might Be Pretty High Tier I Can Not In Good Conscience Rate This Higher That Would Destroy All Creditability

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Mar 16, 2022
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