its so hilariously bizarre how seriously they take breakfast time
Nori and Zin make some breakfast.
Be warned, this project is aimed at older audiences.
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When I first wrote this pilot, it was almost 2 years ago in 2020 before covid even started, and around that time, I was still learning animation ins the Toon Boom Harmony program. I should have had this done a long time ago (I wanted to have it done earlier back in 2021), but it took me WAY longer to finish than I expected. So I know and am aware of the problems with it which is why I already started production on the next episode. I hope I could make it way better than the pilot.
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its so hilariously bizarre how seriously they take breakfast time
High quality animation
(I know i had a minor role in this, witnessed a lot of the production process and am also a good friend of yours, but imma try to be as balanced as i can.)
For your first cartoon over 5 minutes long with multiple VAs, original musics by ShadyVox (who worked with Piemations a number of times), and an art style sitting somewhere between adorable and "Wow does Zin's ass look great today!", I firmly believe you did a fantastic job making this.
2020 and the effects of the pandemic during that year really sucked, and thats something just about anyone can agree with. I'm sure many other creators experienced problems like you did during the time spent making this cartoon. It's not a point meant to put you down, its more meant to be a relatable understanding of circumstances.
I definitely see an improvement of skill as the video progresses, some body movements are not as clean in the first 30 seconds as they are after 3:30. I view this as a good quality, not as a flaw. All kinds of things happen in the span of two years, including improvement.
One thing i will point out that i see flaws with is the comedy. There were a number of times i laughed and adorb-gushed, like at the unified "Awwwww" of disappointment. But there is plenty of room for improvement with funny situations which makes me want to see more of what you could be capable of!
Again, its your first pilot. Yeah its not perfect, but nothing truly is. Good visuals, voices, music, and easy intro plot. The humor dial could be turned up more, but its definitely there! So for all that, I rate it 4.5/5 stars!
Bro What the Hell this is awesome. Not only are the character Designs Super Neat. But it was super funny, please make More.