I'm proud that you got this finished! We haven't talked in a while, but I've been seeing you post bits and pieces in here. It's awesome to see you doing something much more experimental.
I like the plot twist a lot. When you showcased the character, I thought it was for something unrelated? It was a nice surprise to see them making an appearance. Makes me think about their purpose and what's the implications of such things.
Keep up the great work, man!